community member paper..

I am really happy with how this paper ended up turning out. I used more vivid details and structured my paper more than the previous one. I tried keeping each paragraph to having a single point or topic which i had struggled with in the past. The best part about this was the interview. I really enjoyed interviewing a police officer. For a class in high school we had gone into the police station before and got to see many places within this, so it was nice to get to sit down and learn what its like to be an officer.